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Feeling
Posted On 05/14/2008 05:12:25 by FamilyJules
Melancholy

Poignant

Bittersweet

Aching, longing, yearning

Couldn't happen

Possibly

Or...?

Sublime hurting

Secret, dark and sweet

Ifs

What if

What then?

Couldn't

Could, though

Ache; Aching

Yearning...desperately

Don't want it

Need it

Connection

Deeper

Without the actual you

You cannot submit

Nor can I

Deeper, the idea

Vision 

Oh, to touch 

Can I touch you? 

Do I? 

At all? 

Don’t touch me!

Please.

Diaphanous, fleeting, barely glimpsed

Something there

Corner of the eye

Peripheral

Nothing 

Everything

But, what if?

Sweetest hurting

Wounds me

Deeply

Possibilities 

Only 

Pain

Essential

Ache

Bittersweet, secret

I know

Lived it

Didn't need “you”

Just the idea  


Of you


Tags: Poetry Poems Feelings



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From: littlered
05/15/2008 01:33:26
Heartfelt words, filled with feeling, emotions and depth!

From: wannabe
05/14/2008 19:12:34

I'm bad at poems have 2 ask my son, he does poems and my daughter also.   I'm sorry julesy
well written though

From: FamilyJules
05/14/2008 18:55:47
This sums up my feelings about the possibility of me ever falling in love again, basically, and thanks for the comments people, it means a lot to me


From: Sinsin
05/14/2008 18:41:38
Yes!


From: FamilyJules
05/14/2008 18:38:49
EEEEEEEEEK not "lust," swear!!  Feeling and true connection, you know?


From: EuniceCrankyponts
05/14/2008 18:33:25

Jules - for a minute there I thought you were talking about sleep = the needing and wanting but it can't happen.....then I GOT it....

 

LUST! :) I am sending you a separate message...  

From: BrandiLea
05/14/2008 18:10:46
Deep... I 'feel' the meaning.


From: Dev_meister
05/14/2008 09:54:27
lovely!!!!


From: n2enigmas
05/14/2008 09:16:37
oh my. VERY good jules, very good.


From: LizLizLiz
05/14/2008 08:49:39
This is really great Julesy, Well Done!


From: reddMary
05/14/2008 08:19:40
Those words have deep meaning behind them.  I can feel what you are saying.


From: Abbie
05/14/2008 08:09:29

this is really good!

thanks for letting me see it!



From: PhillipS1961
05/14/2008 07:11:07
This is beautiful Jules, thankyou.


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