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My Marketing Thingie; Feedback Requested
Posted On 05/25/2008 18:33:35 by FamilyJules

Ok, so I finally "finished" my marketing piece thingie. This is a postcard that I'm gonna mail/hand-deliver to local businesses, to advertise my services and hopefully drum up some business and/or get a "real" job.

It's meant to be an amalgam of resume/portfolio/business card, and I'd love some feedback on it.

I'm not completely in love with it yet, see.

Also, pardon the black boxes. It's not that I don't trust those of you I know, but it's not a good idea, I've found, to put your last name and email and phone number online, when you don't know exactly who will be looking.

Yeah, so...let me know what you think, if you will.

 

 

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05/26/2008 17:44:37
Hey Jules!  Dunno if you know or not, but marketing is what i do too, and i'd like to think imma perty gud at it....  have a bit of feedback, if you like... First off - I LOVE LOVE LOVE your logo - creative and useful - GOOD FOR YOU!  using the piece as your portfolio is good, especially if some of the businesses you have highlighted are local businesses - might make the bits on the right a lil bigger for legibility purposes.  I also like on the address side how you have your achievements listed.  Might also list how long you've been in the field "XX years of experience working for you!!"  Something like that....  adds to credibility.  Hope that helps... or feel free to ignore...  LOL!!   


05/26/2008 13:57:16
Looking good Jules!


05/26/2008 10:18:05

I think your pretty damn clever and that is pretty damn smart.

I like the heading they are giving a clear message, i would be attracted to that



05/26/2008 02:21:15
Thats bee-you-tee-fool work Jules!
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05/26/2008 01:35:36
I love it Jules!


05/25/2008 21:21:44
i've got a few suggestions, but i wanna get with you on instant messenger and talk to you about them in real time.  let me know when would be a good time to do that.


05/25/2008 19:28:00
It looks nice, .

So, why the black bars, Jules? Some of us already know your last name.


05/25/2008 19:17:29
rid yourself of the giraffe thingie, other than that, it's great.


05/25/2008 19:16:49
I like your logo


05/25/2008 19:14:33
OHHH! I love love it! You should get into business making marketing postcards! :)


05/25/2008 19:07:47
This is great, Jules. If they don't hire you from this they need their eyes tested.


05/25/2008 18:54:47

absolutely fab jules

i would totally hire you, if i had money/a business/any designing requirements lol


 


well done!!



05/25/2008 18:50:39
looks good



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